Marketplace of Dreams

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She is compliant, willing.
She seeks only pleasure.
Her pleasure is yours.
Tell her what to do, or
Say, "Surprise me."
You won't be disappointed.
Her body is lush, full, and
she is very, very feminine.
She will bring out the maleness in you.
If you want a bitch goddess, just tell her.
She'll take it from there.
If you want to punish her as a whore,
Believe me, she knows she deserves it.
Just, don't leave marks.
If you want to be punished,
Just tell her.
She will leave marks.
If you wish to marry her,
Arrangements can be made.
She will be yours until you decide to return her.
If you wish to be humiliated,
Just say so.
She's very, very good at it.
If you wish to humiliate her,
She'll be devastated.
She can come in public,
At the snap of your fingers.
Drop at your feet, or,
Please all your friends
While you watch.
You won't be disappointed,
and neither will they.
Come, darling, let him see you.
See, skin of ivory, soft and warm,
The breasts full, pert,
So responsive.
The bottom full, bouncy, promising
Hours, days, weeks of pleasure.
She will respond to you.
Touch her, you'll see.
Her eyes flashing - she senses you desire a woman of personality.
She's had sex before, but that can be reset,
If it's a virgin you're after.
The surgery won't take a minute, and
We'll match her mind to it,
As well.
You can deflower her over and over again.
But if you want a real woman,
A real, breathing, living woman.
That may or may not be pleased
With everything you are
With everything you do
That may or may not fall in love with you.
That will keep you guessing for the
Rest of your life.
That will be
Extra.

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guysimple1674guysimple1674almost 11 years ago
The conclusion was super

every good creation leaves an impression, it's the conclusion that matters most, and indeed, here it was awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
better

Was convinced no one deserved a 5 . . . til I read it (& I'm a lit major).

deliciousthoughtsdeliciousthoughtsover 11 years ago
Loved it...

... absolutely loved it :)

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
ok

was torn between a 4 and 5, you got a 5. i like where it goes, it would have been nicer if it didn't take that long, i.e. a little more edit, little more punching up

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