ice cubes melt
in lazy amber
on your tongue
as i melt
back to wall
cheeks on fire
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calibrator, Ashesh9 favorited this poem!
Quite good! The simplicity lights the fire of this one. I like it!
Sensitive , sensuous , seductive !!!
bless y'all :D
this is an oldie i came across in my thread over on the forum. thought it could use an outing! :p
.....simple yet conveying everything we need to know about this intimate slice of time. Ice starts it but fire ends it, great synchronicity.
num, num, num...
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