melt

bybutters©

ice cubes melt
in lazy amber
ice drips
on your tongue
as i melt
back to wall
thighs trembling
cheeks on fire

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by Koba12/24/13

Quite good! The simplicity lights the fire of this one. I like it!

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by Ashesh912/23/13

Wow , Butter !!

Sensitive , sensuous , seductive !!!

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by butters12/23/13

aw

bless y'all :D

this is an oldie i came across in my thread over on the forum. thought it could use an outing! :p

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by Tristesse212/23/13

So deceptively .......

.....simple yet conveying everything we need to know about this intimate slice of time. Ice starts it but fire ends it, great synchronicity.

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by HarryHill12/23/13

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