- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Mental Fortitude
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sublime messages
caress the mental fortitude
of one's self
what to believe and whom
forever trying to change
who we are
brainwashing, tugging at the
mind's eye to find
the one real truth...
if there is one
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREover 17 years agoI want to suggest substituting “sublime” with “subliminal” (or a similar word). I could not associate sublime with: “brainwashing, tugging at the mind's eye...” Unless of course it said in irony (The tone did not come across to me though as ironic).
I admire the courage the perseverance and the honesty revealed in struggling for one’s truth (evasive or even unattainable as it may be), where many (most?) give up as soon as possible.
LeBrozover 17 years agoThe core person still remains,
But as life goes on, that core evolves till no longer recognized.
