Misplaced Faith

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Need deep in turbulents
reality floats away
eroding all her hope
time and life ebb

Father, brothers, lovers
relationships on sand
she would walk this beach again
had she a better carpenter

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Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeabout 20 years ago
Poignant

The first line made me stumble for a second, but the rest of the poem is beautiful. Maybe it could be a bit more tangible, but that would be a different poem. :)

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