- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Mixed media
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Click herefight the desire to write you
with your own sharp
hyper realism, make my mind twist
on Birkenstock toe
like Kaiser Soze on open mic night
white plates without markings
become clues for the hair lipped inspector
spoons tap glass and request
One more,
just one more time.
Spin me around
the potters wheel
pink eraser in one hand,
water color brush in the other
soak me,
salt me,
splotched and
rusted
desperate for the closeness of
yourself
in me
- COMMENTS
YDDabout 20 years agoI especially like the image of "make my mind twist
on Birkenstock toe".
A good read.
Maria2394about 20 years agoyou guys had an art fair and didnt invite me?
thats okay, this was almost as good as being there, the potters wheel is a perfect image..made me see demi moore in Ghost with patrick sleazy grabbing all over her nearly naked bod, damn that gals hot!!! so is this poem ;)
dreamsweetabout 20 years ago"like Kaiser Soze on open mic night" brought me a little giggle for the day. Thanks!
Tathagataabout 20 years agoimagery , especially the hair lipped inspector
That creates and almost 1940's film noir feel to the whole thing.
and the potters wheel is a nice touch also
very well done
thank you
