- Non-Erotic Poetry
- MLP~ Rhythm walking
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A Heron steps
in water lightly
its long legs
in a slow pace
stepping
.........step
..............step
along the river's
greeting shore
this long neck bird
rhythm walking
paced
......watches
..............steps
hunting the water
its only chore
to end the rumblings
of it's stomach's roar
splash
.......neck recoils
...................swallows
steps
- COMMENTS
LuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years agogreat one...whish i'd known this was on your list...you could have made it an illustrated with some great Heron pics I took from my boat this summer! LOL :)
great picture thought...without the pictures;)
T
jthserraover 18 years agothat will let you indent those lines without the dots...
for each (&)nbsp; without the parenthesis you will get a single blank space. Didn't vote on this one, but I'm not sure what the 50 will do.
Anonymousover 18 years agoArt can paint the feathers on a bald eagle in flight.Make you want to take cover as th shadow passes you by.
quasarover 18 years agoYou tend to describe nature like non-other. A true feel for the wilderness and the animals that inhabit there. I do enjoy your nature poetry as well as your ZMP poems. Please continue to fill our minds and hearts with your RLP~ river life poetry.
Q
