Moon Shadow

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a golden orb
on glass blanket,
seville orange haze
long gone.

night sways
and gentle breezes blow
from somewhere,
nocturnal cries.

cool granules damp
from endless licks
threaten to swallow me.

take me,
your calm beacon calls,
surreal.

behind,
a reminder of errors
as your golden beams
entice my soul.

moon shadows dance
to siren songs,
on wind
they carry whispers...

come home.

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flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Serene and soulful

As beautiful to read as it must have been to experience. Almost! Wonderful poem, fkc.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
There....

...was plenty here before I ever saw it, cat. Thanks for the kind words -- they are more than I deserve for moving a few commas around. :kiss:

seasparksseasparksalmost 20 years ago
Very nice work indeed

The imagery is beautiful, and the poem really speaks from the heart.

Altogether better than my poor attenpts at poetry!

ferociouskittycatferociouskittycatalmost 20 years agoAuthor
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This poem owes its glory thank you to tarablackwood22.

Thank you tara for taking the time to edit and advise on this one. It meant a lot, and I'm now proud of how it turned out. Not only a great poet, but a wonderful person too. Thank you.

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