The roar of silence; a warm moonlit beach
Promises fall
He comes singing softly fathomless
Nightly stars call
Thundering pulse beckons, roaring
A living, breathing wall
Just a dream...
Twilight
Smoothly the ends of the earth crumble
Raindrops etch away under cover
The pulsing waves silence, snuffled
Turn in the dark to feel another
Excitement - covered with age pounding the dream of love
Comes a fantasy lover
Sliding skin; breath so hot
Sighs rising
The promie of a touch so beautiful
Keenly lay dying
Pounding of waves echoes free in the hollows
Left alone softly crying
Came the dream
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i think you are new;
sonically this is nice, be careful with it, poets tend to see it as a cheap effect, -ly. -ing
The promie of a touch so beautiful
Keenly lay dying
Pounding of waves echoes free in the hollows
Left alone softly crying
promie doesn't seem to fit in with the overall tone
be careful with it: although i admit i like
singing softly fathomlessmore...
THE ROAR OF THE OCEAN
the slapping of the waves upon the shore bathed in the moons rays. TK U MLJ LV NV
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