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A lick of my lips reveals,
I missed a bit of you.
The taste on my tongue,
Leaves me wanting
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- COMMENTS
KOLKOREover 16 years agoThis poem reminded me of what you did in: "You Show Me". While the latter was a full blown concert this one is a small minuet. But the principle is the same. Here you become aware of the other through your own physical sensation. That sensation brings the memory of the lover, which in turn awakes your own appetites...And all that in few elegant words. How remarkable!
Amyfriendover 16 years agosweet and very effective. Nice job, but maybe it didn't need the punctuation.
