more than midnight

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she was more,
than a first stolen glance,
or the meeting of midnight
with warm brandy
swirling in snifters.

she was as soft as a sunirse
with childlike eyes,
of pale whispers and prayers
to the harvest of clouds.

to many raindrops
to clutter,
into tiny pools of darkness
where downpours
spare no rhthym,
and seeping puddles
cannot dance.

she was romance,
and the warm kiss
of a petals blush,
more than the mere rush
of meeting at midnight

she
was
love,
that needs
the comfort
of two pillows,
found content
into the hope
of tomorrow's
sunrise.

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
More than "O's"

These are my favorite lines:

"where downpours

spare no rhthym,

and seeping puddles

cannot dance."

But to be honest I liked the whole damn thing.

lol,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned on the new poem thread* blue *

Aunty MuseAunty Museover 18 years ago
Edit

to(o) many raindrops

of a petal(')s blush,

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

What an exquisite way

to start the day,

in the arms of love

provided by sweet GA peaches.....

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