- Erotic Poetry
- Morning Coffee
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
Morning Coffee
Your hazelnut voice wraps around me,
Embracing me, pulling me.
I tumble into your soul through
Your mocha eyes.
Vanilla kisses sprinkle down my neck.
Bitter black coffee bites
Sting my nipples, followed by soothing
Iced latte licks.
You pierce me like a spoon,
Blending our bodies as
Coffee and cream, into one delicious
Recipe.
--Cate Colbert
- COMMENTS
Maria2394about 20 years agoI have a tiny problem with the descriptions...hazelnut, mocha etc...suppose a NON coffee drinker reads this poem, has no idea what those flavors are ( as pertaining to coffee) is hazelnut sweet? bitter? sharp, sublime? how does mocha relate to eyes? and so on...
I am not criticizing, just pointing out that words are only as good as their role in a poem and these are just well, just sorta stuck in there...
how would/could you change this so that the words are felt, not just "there".It is an interesting metaphor, I agree, but plainy put. I believe you have it in you to do much better :)
English Ladyabout 20 years agoWow I don't even like coffee but this poem is wonderfully evocative!
Anonymousabout 20 years agoUsing the different senses and the anatomical geography was really nice!
sandspikeabout 20 years agocoffee and sex, images that work well together, so many
types
