My First Erotic Poem

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My First Erotic Poem

SilentMercy


You told me you would never leave me
You said it with your crystal eyes locked with mine
As your soft lips sank onto me
And your throat relaxed for the first time
You told me you would never leave me
You said it with your heart
As you tightened around me
Working my seed into your warm center
You told me you would never leave me
As your hair fell across my lips
As the collar I gave you was tightened just one more notch
For the lies
I knew you were lying
I could see it in those crystal eyes of yours
The way your back would arch as I ran my fingers down your neck
The way you threw your head back when you came, gripping the sheets and not my hands
You told me you would never leave me as your hand found me
Promising always to remain loyal
So pathetic, that the fastest way to my heart was my body, my cock
How you found that and burned me with it
And as I tightened that worthless collar that one last time
I knew that it meant more to me than you did

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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Needs the editing out of practically every 'you/your/as'

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
Interesting

inversion. However not enough poetry to back it up. Comes off as more of a morbid advertisement. God forbid. An overly generous score of 4. Coupled with the suspicion, that you will feel the need...go ahead.