tagNon-Erotic PoetryMy heart and soul to you

My heart and soul to you

byMrFaithful©

My mind a tumult of jumbled thoughts
     My heart tormented by longing
     My soul hollow without you

My days are passed with thoughts
     Of the memories and desires evoked
     A raging inferno waiting to be quenched

This unease of my very being
     My desire to be held
     But ever and only by one

How much longer I don't know
     But for you my life I'll wait
     Forever apart we shall not be

Though now my nights are hard to bear
     I have this assurance of you
     That the hollowness will be filled by you

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by Anonymous04/28/13

Your best poem, but the last two lines are weak.

A five, to reward improvement.

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