- Erotic Poetry
- My Love
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Did you ever in your wildest dreams imagine
Two months ago when we first met
How quickly we would build on passion
And exactly how involved we would get?
There's been a lot of excitement
There's been a bit of pain
But all in all you have my heart
The best part of me has become your gain.
A whirlwind romance through many miles
A captivation of hearts
You blow me away with all that you say
And I cannot imagine us apart.
I worry when you're down
It's worse when you are ill
And then when things start looking up
You come right back to thrill.
A pleasure fantasy of mine would be
To spend real time with you my love
I want to wrap my legs around you
Our union fitting like a glove.
Your voice sends shock waves right through me
And when you laugh, you light my life
You help me through the darkest times
And alleviate so much strife.
I can only imagine what it would be like
To be in your arms for real
To taste your sweet kisses
And devour you like my favorite meal.
I want to feast upon you
To take you deep inside
To feel your soft caresses
Up the inside of my thighs.
Some day, my love, we'll have to meet
And consummate this fling
This online thing, this wild romance
It's such a beautiful thing.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 13 years agoReading this it's likely I am not going to tell u something u don't know. This is addressed to all, and sundry. This poem of talent, structured, clever, casual rhyme, covers a topic thousands Published or millions written before. It's not an obvious replication given the above; but it lacks Bite. It needed crescendo, partly because it's a blade in a grass meadow. It had to startle, reveal prince of some field, a high stat figure secret adore. .in dream or other to be literally safe, a lecturer in moral phil, religious head? Or A man totally wife dependant. All true poets will of course follow thru their own inspire. . this prompts such my only role. Generalise from this, if only even to publish some tryst here, on non individualised Love or Sex angle you need to be different. . The human race has addressed the issue for over 3 thousand years IN script. In million fold.. This is not a call for shock or bizarre, only the shocking and biz can turn such into meaningful pen. This is not a Lecture, it's meant to aid, and have you risk the depths of Your Inspire. BUT as a certain Liverpudlian once put it, to paraphrase, there is no sign the world has had enough of Silly Love Songs. In a song without time. Clever.
Avarcalionover 17 years agoThis is a great poem. It's *so* romantic, and sexy. I could only hope for such an experience. Keep up the great writing.
MacDukeover 18 years agoA poem or anthem for cyber lovers the world over - at least those who know the emotion and heart involved are so much more than a five-fingered hand.
Would that it were a fling,
this thing.
But it is its own being,
a force to contend with the lust
of wanting and seeing.
A live wire that connects us over 2000 miles,
and stirs our juices amid our breathless smiles.
A hope and love that illuminates the night,
knowing the exquisite release that will come at first sight.
Nothing could approach the thrill of being inside,
each other,
to have you gaze down upon me while seated astride,
while our juices drip and mingle over the fire to smother.
My Love may have others to experience and explore,
but I know one day our waiting will be a chore,
no more.
Will it be as good as our fantasy?
Even better, my darling, is my prophecy.
