My Original Sin

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Lying within Your arms
Our soft parted lips
That whispered kiss
So tender
Urgency building
Fingertips playing
Over skin like a fined tuned instrument
The heat of our desires
Like a bright burning flame of candlelight
The dampness of desire
The sensitive touch
That makes the back arch
Reaching out for more
That taste of love and lust
You are my original sin
Sweet and delicious
You are that shivering anticipation
Stroking deep within
Touching, owning every inch of me
i want You
i need You
i love You
With You i enter a world
Of desires and dreams
A world of pleasure
Because You own me
Because
You are my original sin.

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barneypilotbarneypilotalmost 13 years ago
I like it!

I like your style. But why is the "i" always lower case when it is you?