My Submission

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. The sweet soft touch

Your fingers entwined with mine

Brush of our lips

Your breath in my hair

Whispering I love you in my ear

My gentle submission to you

The lust in your eyes

Sting of my ass

Pleads of release

Cries of pain and pleasure

Dance of giving and taking

My passionate submission to you

The love of my heart

Your understanding voice

Tenderness of your heart

Bonds beyond time and place

Mutual respect full of honesty and trust

My complete submission to you

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MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailabout 18 years ago
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some people here believe that is all you should leave

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
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this poem was mentioned in the thread New Poems Reviews

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