My Successful Day

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I found inexpensive plastic containers
Worthy of my most meaningful
Artifacts, gadgets and leftover forgotten parts
~
There were moments looking through a lens
That defines heat and cold
My Love, that I wanted to see
Through to your undies

That is a stain I made I imagined
I hope and titillated
Move on to the next success
~
Standing in a changing room
Warm hat and scarf, naked but
For thermal drawers and digital
Camera and fleshy smile
With mustache realize my belt hole
Means more curvy today

Progress in all things

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
progress in all things indeed.

Winding down after reading through some wonderful poems amongst the 50+ then finding this.........it's a joy.

IcingsugarIcingsugarabout 20 years ago
Shweet

Small Stuff is what our lives are made up of. All the big stuff is just Small Stuff in bundles. This was a poem about Small Stuff, and a damn striking one too.

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
What Annaswirls said

i don't know how you do it. lol. you manage to make even the mundane events of the day poetic, darn you. :) xoAnge

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
my successful poem

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