Naked Fig

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darkmaas
darkmaas
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I bought them
for a recipe
from Martha’s book of pies,
but we ate them
fresh
after the rain
rushed up the street
and washed away
the summer heat.

in those days they were rare
and of a voluptuary nature
not native to our northern
latitude

we sat close and mostly naked
on the dark verandah
and watched the rain black street
grow misty with the quiet hiss
of passing cars

you shivered in the darkness
cool
the goose bumps
covering your skin
but you were happy
that I cared enough
to share a fig
and loved me
in a whisper
even though
they were sweet
but rather tasteless.

darkmaas
darkmaas
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PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersover 15 years ago
Gorgeous

I loved in this your use of simple but evocative language and images. I also liked the wistfulness implied in the ending. This is haunting.

BooMerengueBooMerenguealmost 20 years ago
!

Darkmaas... it's nice to hear you again. Made me think of New Orleans in December. Thank you.

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
..i love to share food with a lover.

i don't believe i've read you writing before.

this was a pleasant place to start.

very nice romantic piece!

xo, fawnie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Enjoyed

the set up of this scene, background, fx, and the cast?great work. (Poor figs, they are so over-looked as a fruit, but they are tasty in jam on toast.)

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
To give a fig

One of the best of the day

Surely the best of the

erratic erotic

offering

A good read