- Erotic Poetry
- Net Groom
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Click hereWhat wonderous text
he does exude!
Such text that
takes me
makes me
nude.
What sensualist's
words and phrases
bind us,
and leave
all common sense
behind us.
Our timing crossed,
our paths did bend.
The magic of meeting
yet again.
What joy!
His name upon my screen.
I love a man I've never seen.
- COMMENTS
amansabout 20 years agoAuthorDear Icing Sugar, I agree with you about the caps. I didn't like it either, so I am submitting an edit. Thanks for the advice.
And to all who take the time who comment, my sincere appreciation.
Anonymousabout 20 years ago....courtesy of anna's mentioning it in the poetry forum. I'm glad I looked it's a good piece of work from a newly arrived poet. Welcome - I look fprward to more of your work.
jthserraabout 20 years agohere and an excellent ending. Fragile web indeed...
and the dark spider.
well done...
jim :)
Icingsugarabout 20 years agoA word on a screen, thousand miles away, can seem just as real and make us feel in ways that would had been thought of as insane only a decade or two ago. The world is changing. This poem reflects that very well. Good job. :)
One little word of advise though: The way you start every line with a capital letter makes some places really weird to read. No real need for that, I think.
Anonymousabout 20 years agois there a club-- a cool name? we need one
hmmm
I have used the term literary exhibitionist and verbal voyeur, but it is more than that isn't it?
this part cracked me up! I enjoyed reading this.
"What wonderous text
He does exude!
Such text that
Takes me
Makes me
Nude."
