- Non-Erotic Poetry
- (new year)
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with every new year
i get older
and when the year gets older
i still get older
so what's the point?
wh,
2013-12-28
- COMMENTS
todski28over 10 years agohad a cynical, or despairing lilt for me as a reader, a look at the inevitable, a shrug of the shoulders and asking the question what's the point?
Senna Jawaover 10 years agoAuthorThank you g-m for your reading (makes me feel like writing another poem).
Pelegrino, think about the meaning of the word "point" in the given context (and don't me "sir, I know it" :-). Triviality is alien to my poem.
greenmountaineerover 10 years agoI liked how the last line appears to be a cynical statement in the form of a question for some and for others one that invites a positive response. It made me think how we often go looking for data that support our prior assumptions.
twelveooneover 10 years agois to buy a better calender
I don't know if Snap-on-tools still puts them out...
5ed
