- Erotic Poetry
- Night and Mouth
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The waiting mouth wants biting
slow, deliberate, a plum of night,
its fruit open to texture and tones
of breath drawn, anticipating
fingertips on trails of skin, shining
in phosphorescent pinpoints bent
to the rose to you in first flush,
risen, blushed with fever, oozing
sweet, glass smooth and curved
to the waiting mouth fleshed
around the darkness in kisses.
- COMMENTS
twelveoonealmost 20 years agoExcept for this:
its fruit open
What fruit? the plum? I would drop "its fruit"
WickedEvealmost 20 years agothough I'm not quite sure about "to the rose to you." Maybe it's the to-to in that one line.
My Erotic Tailalmost 20 years agowonderful poem, enjoyed it very much, Thank you, (~_*)
Maria2394almost 20 years agothis is really romantic and sexy at the same time. I hope you post often and plenty , nice new voice :)
