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Click hereDon't look at me like I'm not here.
You look right through me and don't even care.
Don’t tell me you love me.
You say it, and I know you don't mean it.
Don't touch me to try to show me that you care.
Your touch is like ice on my body, numbing me.
Empty eyes look at me,
trying to look into my soul,
but nothing they see.
Hard lips press against mine,
trying to kiss all these thoughts
to take them away from me.
Hands colder than ice touch me
turning me cold,
making me freeze.
Words softly spoken
don't mean a thing
because they fall upon deaf ears.
I mean nothing,
he tries to hide it
but fails.
He fails to see
that I see though him.
He is transparent to me.
What once was there
is now forever gone
never to be found again.
No more hurt
No more pain
No more lies.
No more suffering
No more abuse
No more tears.
She awakens to see
it was all a dream
that he's still here.
Still loving
Still caring
Still the same.
Eyes filled with love,
they look upon her face,
they see into her heart.
Soft, tender lips
kiss the nightmares
and fears away.
Arms hold her close
as she melts into him,
falling back asleep.
Nightmares are gone,
no more bad thoughts.
Only him whispering how much he loves her.
stanza got a little rough, losing the rhythm. When you moved into the three line stanzas I felt the flow improve. You might work this one reading it out loud. Any areas that are tough to read or that don't flow off your tongue need your attention.
"She awakens to see
it was all a dream
that he's still here.
Still loving
Still caring
Still the same.
Eyes filled with love,
they look upon her face,
they see into her heart."
Seems to work well, but...
"Words softly spoken
don't mean a thing
because they fall upon deaf ears."
The last line here needs some trimming, perhaps simply say... "they fall on deaf ears."
jim :)