Night's End

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Remec
Remec
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Dawn rises,
soft, red-orange flower
building its way to
blinding fireball,

I drop the bag with
a clang, tools of the
trade are heavy, and head
to the back.
Bed and shower vie for
my attention, but cool water
wins out over soft, comforting
pillows.

Standing in the spray, I
unwind from the night;
even as I watch the
vampire dust spiral down
the drain.

Remec
Remec
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MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailover 17 years ago
Redo

the first set of lines. Otherwise liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not erotic?

I find this poem incredibly erotic. I know the vampiredust thing is a clever idea from one of the threads but I tune in more to the idea of work, strength. fatigue, water, warmth and masculinity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Oh no!

Don't let Vampire Dust go down the drain! <joke> I liked this odd little poem. Thanks.

Tess

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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What an image ~

A vampire hunter's job is never done...

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