- Erotic Poetry
- Nose In her Prose II
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I gave her a stick of gum in order for her to exercise her jaw. She said, "I just love to smoke you!" then molded her tongue around my cigar. I was fiddling with my fiddle fingers as if plucking a labia song. She yelled out, "Don't stop," while I played in the key of 'e'cstasy. I vowed to shoot her with my secret weapon which is no longer a secret. Blowing seven double 'O' smoke rings in the afterglow.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 18 years agoWow! This is waaaay different for you ~ or have I been playing hooky for too long? What works here is that you've kept it short without too many run on thoughts.
creammuffinalmost 18 years agoGood line: "Blowing seven double 'O' smoke rings in the afterglow."
The other lines about labia song, gum, secret weapon, etc. don't work very well - at least in this poem. The poem has potential, but needs work. Try to rise above your secret weapon. ;)
