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fridayam
fridayam
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I
Bare boughs bud birds
throstling madly as they are
birthed into air.

II
Not so much Moon as sister:
dead twin carried to term
petrified within one womb

III
Poor, we covered our walls in "Art":
she had one priceless thing in
an otherwise empty room.

fridayam
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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
2nd

attempt at comment. I is better than most haiku, anyway. But is it is not why say so? Don't bother trying to foil the "Oh, this must be crowd". I wrote a 7-5-7, once, it got hammered, problem was - it was closer, then any of the shit floating down the river. I fived it, they are all pretty good, not sure why the grouping.

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