Not in California II

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/17/2021
Created 04/26/2004
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I miss you.

I miss teeth on my nipples,
fingertips dipping
gently into damp
drawn by desire.

I miss my breath catching sharply,
yours burning my neck.

I miss hands around my waist
pulling my hips onto yours.

I miss cock stuffed cunt
deep enough to tickle
the back of my throat.

I miss your energy just fucking the hell out of mine
until the spinning of the cosmos reels
through screams that make neighbors wonder.

I miss the taste of leaked come licked
off your belly.

I miss the weight
of sated desires
drawing me toward dreams.


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3 Comments
sexysmilesexysmileabout 16 years ago
I liked it,

even if he didn't! Good of you to have a sense of humor about it! :)

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 16 years agoAuthor
LOL

I suppose the fact that even the man for whom this was written won't comment on it is comment enough!

Back to the drawing board...

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Seems like the flip side of fidelity/geography issues in the original.