Obedience

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Look at me, up in here, im a real fuckin king, now oit there I aint even queen.
She's the queen, look at us we're like dogs walkin around on our paws, doin whatever she says when she calls.
Begging for pleasure yet getting denied, untill she requests to be tied, as bondage is a pleasure we both can enjoy.
Both rough and gental which ever you like, the gental way is mine tonight
Tied to the bed so I tweek her nipples, till their small and hard like nickels.
Nudging her clit with my nose, then move down and start on the toes.
Work back up on her thighs, then futher still before uncovering her eyes.
Trusting in when she starts to wimper, stoping soon just to lick her.
Till she soon hurts to finish, with an orgasm that could be in Guinness.
Following soon you spert and jizz, flowing far to her cleavage.
She looks down and to your surprise, laps it up with lust in her eyes

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LittleRedBearLittleRedBearover 10 years agoAuthor
thx

thk u i usually try to have the end to every other half sentence match the other end of the rest of its sentence

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hmm.

It was alright, just needs some spelling and grammar correction. You should consider finding someone to edit for you.

LittleRedBearLittleRedBearover 10 years agoAuthor
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yes kind of i made the poem up at work and there were three of us guys and one girl and we would flirt a lot and we basically did as she asked of us and she mentioned she likes bondage when i asked about her sex life so i grabbed some rope and toyed with her and the rest is just fantasy to have her bound and have a soft way of exploiting her body as i find that more appealing than sexual torture at this point in my life

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Does this piece change POV or are there three people? Interesting rhyme choices.

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