Obscene Label

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Don't call me that.

If you want
call me a bastard.
Yes, It's a lie.
I may not like my father
but I know who he is.

Call me an asshole.
It is a fitting title.
Shit does spill out of me
from time to time.

Label me a fool
I'll dance for the pleasure
of the court.
I've done far worse and held my high.

Tell me I'm 'just sad'.
Let hateful pity slide
off the tongue like
rancid wine.

Spit my name out
as if it was the filth
of all the shame and anger
that spills from this tiny world.

But don't you dare call me that

brutal raping slut
posturing filthy coward
shortsighted gluttonous pig

Don't ever call me a man.

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angelicminxangelicminxalmost 18 years ago
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Wow. An impressive way to get a point across. Last line was quite unexpected. ~Minx

irishcatsmeowirishcatsmeowalmost 18 years ago
WOW!

Very powerful and what a jolt at the end....you sure know how to evoke emotion.

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 18 years ago
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your poem is mentioned in the new poem review http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=17302497#post17302497

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
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whoa ouch, damn that was a sock in the gut... well written, man!

~as