Ocean Sunrise

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Part 3 of the 3 part series

Updated 06/07/2023
Created 07/16/2012
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oneiria
oneiria
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The last mind
clings to a hydrothermal vent
deep in the boiling sea,

basking in the warmth
of the red giant sun

that fills
the vanishing sky.

oneiria
oneiria
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AngelineAngelineover 11 years ago
Also 5ed this poem

It seems like the perfect companion piece to your other submission. Have you considered putting them together somehow? Maybe as Parts 1 and 2?

Thank you for the read. Really a lovely, spare piece.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IF THE HANDS COULD PAINT

what the sky reveals. TK U MLJ LV NV

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