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- Ode on a Grecian's Urn
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through his fingers,
her proud Hellenic hooters
now ashes in the wind.
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Ashesh9almost 10 years agoComment on a Literotic Poem
a Timeless look on the Impermanence of the Human condition !! 5-ed.
ishtatalmost 10 years ago"Old on a Grecian urn"
You could leave out 'her smooth', 'his, 'her proud' and 'now' without losing meaning.
'White hair' conveys the sense of time without the need for 'now.' There you are , a 35% trim - feel free to ignore.
