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Click hereYour silken length
Your creamy treasures
A lusty moan
A naughty pleasure
I use my teeth
to increase friction
It grows, it thickens
Your mighty erection
A spewing treat
to cover my tits
but oh so much better
upon my red lips
I drink your nectar
I suck you dry
I worship you
Oh mighty cock! I cry
Give it to me
Let me die
With a man between my legs
and a cock inside!
Not much to add to cward2's thoughts;
just let me add
Welcome to Lit with this
your first write...
this could be a good poem. two points: 1)is the word 'might' in line 8 a typo, changing it to 'mighty' would sound better
2) consider using different images, too much concrete images makes the poem sound a little samey. suprise the reader!