oh lait

bybutters©

the coffee, barely sipped, grows cold
forgotten now as
cream slow settles down
through black

upended tendrils
slipping quietly
turning on infinitesimal undercurrents

not far away
another blend is perking
hot and frothy
cream shaken
stirred

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by Tsotha04/28/14

I'm glad for the comments before me. Without them, I'd have missed half the fun in this poem.

Oh, and To be contrary, I like the word infinitesimal, here. :) Though it's strange to think of interactionmore...

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by butters01/01/14

cheers for the comment/read gm :)

with infinitesimal, i was kind of feeling the small spiraling as the tendrils reached down, moved by tiny undercurrents/resistance between the two different viscosities.more...

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by greenmountaineer12/31/13

Catching up with my reading, butters. Got the triple entendre. (Yo hablo Español et un peu de Francés.) "Cream slow settles down" feels like you're pouring it, although "infinitesimal" doesn't quitemore...

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by ishtat12/27/13

!!!

Definitely erotic, and for me slightly scary, but good very good in that can be read in perhaps even more ways than Butters intended? Excellent title.

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by butters12/27/13

thanks, y'all :)

there's a reason why the coffee's growing cold, ignored for a fresher blend. past, present, future

12 - you clever man ;)

neo - glad it held its balance. was unsure about that - i wanted it to hang rightmore...

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