Erotic PoetryOh now boyOh now boy
Don’t be coy
You know you want me
As your sex toy
You want your cock
Hard as rock
Between my lips
Ship at dock
You want my ass
Yours at last
Push me down
And take it fast
You want my sex
Knees to neck
Upside down
Make me flex
You want my life
Me as your wife
Together in lust
Beyond this strife
Oh now boy
Don’t be coy
You know you want me
As your sex toy
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We all want our own personal sex toy. Good write
Oh now boys...
You're right...every marriage I've ever been in has been about a 0 in the passion department. Ah, well, if this boy can't fulfill her desires, there are plenty of other boys waiting for a sex goddess like her to come along... or would that be cum along?
I don't think it's the rhyme that's forced, I think the flow is off. Were I to rewrite it, I'd add an "a" to "ship at dock" & remove the "and" from the "take it fast." Better?more...
who would not want to toy with this girl?
but the "wife-life-lust- strife" verse seemed out of place, maybe this is the girl's future desire although the marriage bed should be, but rarely is the scene of fervid passion. otherwise a nice effort full of emotion and desire as well as a strong female confident attitude, and yet giving, not just demanding. nice to see that. also nice rhyme of 1,2 and 4th lines with the break in 3rd. a real pro effort. keep us cumming!more...
coquettish rhyme
A delightful poem with a whimsical progressive story line. The rhyme was a bit forced which detracted slightly from the effort, but, a poem I enjoyed for the heart felt coyness. Thanks for sharing.
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