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Click hereCarnie bells and barker noise
drip with the promised sin of
popcorn-cotton-candy, and
merry-go-round tilt-a-whirls
spinning peals of laughter
and little big-girl screams.
The Quebecois and brazen tarts
speaking French along the pier,
babble queued up and keyed
with pennies in hand,
two minutes of delicious fear
squeezed out in golden heartbeat
rings and chimes.
The salt air sticks to belly
skin and nipple peek, leering eyes
lusting for Japanese plastic dolls
and kewpie pies, booty spilled
and plied with whiskey-beer
and lipstick soda pop for the kids.
Mother snapping pictures in bellowed
camera frames as the old man hollers.
We jump at his command, holding hands
under sparkling lights popping beneath
the rooftops in colored zip-zapping:
To enter here, the line starts here.
Our calliope eyes dizzy,
spinning and bumping, jostling
for the front of the line,
fingers tight around the next ten cents
extorted from our mother,
as the tickets spit out in ones and threes,
with one left out and one left over,
and I-the-oldest told to wait…
a ten-year-old ogling the garish cutout
of the big-breasted plywood woman
with the nasty hole carved above her tits,
heads poking in and out,
hands shoved in my pockets.
The tar walk oozes frosting warm
with pebbles and spit-out gum.
Gulls scream and shit…
French fries drown in white vinegar
as the lifeguards hold swim trunk court,
jostling and fondling smiles.
Women twittering and babies crying,
diapers dumped in sand
as the ocean laps at castles
abandoned by children dragged home in cars,
fathers swearing and mothers cursing,
and my siblings begging: more!
With a Jesus-Christ-you-fucking-kids,
my father doles out nickels
for our one last promised ride.
My brother drives the bumper cars
as my sisters straddle painted horses
who have their feet nailed
to sticky candy-flecked floor,
and I-the-oldest told to watch them
as my father darts beneath
a bar sign glaring at the street:
To enter here, the line starts here
and the tickets spit out in ones and threes,
with one left out, and one left over.
sounds like so many summer vacations I had as a kid ( we'd do Santa's village, Six gun city, and Storyland)
and then hit Revere beach back when it was an amusement park.
" bellowed cameras" " lipstick soda pop" "calliope eyes " "french fries drown in white vinegar"
This is a feast and takes me right back to those days.
And the fact my dad would duck into any joint that had beer really made it hit home too
Great work
packed with memories, and wonderful phrases / i wonder if the length is just a little bit too much for the concept, but there is so much to marvel at / too many good lines to tally up! /
You scare me sometimes
Not only does it have alot of lines I would have wanted to write, it has lines I would have written, down to the puncution.
With a Jesus-Christ-you-fucking-kids,
Gulls scream and shit?
So evocative! I grew up not far from the Jersey shore (it ain't for nothin that I relate to early Springsteen), and your poem decribes experiences I remember well. I may have to repost my "down the shore" poem to respond. :D
Thank you for this trip back to that world.