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There is a thread somewhere in my head.
I can feel it tugging at the minor scribbling of creation.
The tree’s can rejuvenate.
The water may caress infinitely.
And the world is a rose.
The Mystery Valiant
11-3-2002
enjoyed reading this. I loved the imagery, esp the line
'And the world is a rose'
Thanks for the great read
The tree’s __ can rejuvenate
The tree's what? Tree's is possessive, so what word is missing?
Too wordy. Tighten it up:
There is a thread in my head.
It tugs at the minor scribbling of creation.
Trees can rejuvenate.
Water may caress infinitely.
And the world is a rose.