Omniscience

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“Omniscience”


There is a thread somewhere in my head.
I can feel it tugging at the minor scribbling of creation.
The tree’s can rejuvenate.
The water may caress infinitely.
And the world is a rose.

The Mystery Valiant
11-3-2002

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I quite

enjoyed reading this. I loved the imagery, esp the line

'And the world is a rose'

Thanks for the great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
?

The tree’s __ can rejuvenate

The tree's what? Tree's is possessive, so what word is missing?

Too wordy. Tighten it up:

There is a thread in my head.

It tugs at the minor scribbling of creation.

Trees can rejuvenate.

Water may caress infinitely.

And the world is a rose.

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