On Ice

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Cordelia
Cordelia
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You store me in your crystal-covered days
and take me out to catch the light of you.
I keep a polished gleam of amber hue
and hope for a magnanimous display.

Opalescent words gleam with such art,
rendering my protest useless, mired.
I see the velvet shell I once desired.
It feels like retribution’s counterpart.

Shards of broken baubles bite my heart;
enter rationalizations uninspired.
Polish me again with finer grit.

Anxious not to see resentment start,
I become the cool adornment as required –
Bitter ice as diamond’s counterfeit.

A silver setting of reluctant praise
gives background for the facets you subdue;
a touch of inhibition, sapphire blue
enameled cool as careless cloisonné.

Familiar play of smiles, I submit
that touch of jewels worn -- so exquisite.

Cordelia
Cordelia
11 Followers
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duckiesmutduckiesmutover 19 years ago
this line...

caught and held me:

a touch of inhibition, sapphire blue

Lovely...just lovely.

Lalenya LoveLalenya Lovealmost 20 years ago
A Gem of a Sonnet

Beautiful and sparkling! Your writing truly shines! Please continue to submit quality poems such as this one.

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

BooMerengueBooMerenguealmost 20 years ago
!

I can do this... I can do this... I KNOW I can do this...

Thanks Cordy! Its terriffic!

BelilicaBelilicaabout 20 years ago
Oh my...

The words just roll off your tongue. So incredibly sensual.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
wonderful

cordelia

you have wonderful talent.

it's so inspiring

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