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Click hereI threw it out today:
a little ironic
as it's his best book I'd guess.
doesn't matter.
don't want that vile ear-wig
climbing through my mind
in any form.
how could so many "educated" people
embrace all that?
that insipid, unspeakable arrogance
combined with crap like "penis envy"
that only a half-wit or a lunatic
could ever believe?
see that's the trouble, Sigmund,
with pointing out the inferiority
of others.
It's a questionable business
at its best,
but you live in a glass house,
you evil bastard
I hope you got that out of your system :)
I don't feel this as a poem - the beginning and end are fine, but the two middle lines (how could..that..) sound like a debate with friends over a pint of beer. And more importantly, leave too little room for the reader to experience it personally. It's too set - not a discussion or an invitation to consider..but a statement.
Just my 2 cents. Oh, and penis envy? I totally believe in it.