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on the beach

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on the beach

the waves splash the feet

of shadows

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vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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Strong haiku. Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
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So few words, so much said.

buttersbuttersover 14 years ago
If you're interested ...

your piece was reviewed (in brief) today at Literotica's New Poetry Reviews and Recommendations here: http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=32877227&postcount=2908

I'm afraid not being fully recovered I didn't give it the in-depth appraisal I like to give as a matter of course BUT, having said that, I really loved this work of yours. It was my favourite of today's offerings and left me feeling so relaxed and pleased to have read some decent poetry!

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