On The Brink

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I got this feeling,
it’s got me going wild
I don’t understand
what’s going on.

This crazy feeling
from head to toe.
An emotional hurricane
chaotic in it’s flow.

Confusing sensations
cascading through my heart.
Auditory,
visual & olfactory
simultaneously stimulated.

A feeling so intense,
tunnel vision is my sight.
Jubilation, paranoia, pain
ecstasy & fright.

Premonition,
extra sensory perception,
old fashioned female intuition.
Engulfed in a sea of mental
and physiological emotions.

I try to catalogue them,
perhaps I’m simply sad.
Maybe these are symptoms of
a man who’s going mad.

I got this feeling,
I lack the words to describe.
All attempts to describe this feeling
come up short.

This intense feeling,
so pure,
so true.
Ambushed, just before
I vocalize the words
“I do.”

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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
excellent as always

Another great one rare,

love your style, love your words

and thoughts, just love your work.

Thanks.

~ J