Once Upon a Heart

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“Once Upon a Heart”
by Wanton Vixxxen


Once upon a time...
There was a special heart
that yearned for only me
and ached in moments we were apart,
pining for my company

Once upon a time...
There was a gentle heart
seen through my hope filled eyes
that longed to cherish and hold me close
and never could stand goodbyes

Once upon a time...
There was a change of heart
you wore on a lovelorn sleeve
for one shallow and cold,
who left yours tattered and torn
with pain you never could conceive

Once upon a time...
There was a sorry heart
that begged me not to leave,
but just to give romance
a second fairy tale chance
‘cept this heart no longer makes believe

that your
Once upon a heart
Once upon a time
beat only with a love... for me.


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CaPic267CaPic267almost 18 years ago
Trust Betrayed.

He goes and plays, betrays her trust. Then when his part-time fling is over, has the nerve to want to pretend it never happened! The games men play! CP

OSoBuffOSoBuffalmost 18 years ago
Sex and Love---Don't Confuse the Two!!!

With love you can have great sex, but if all you want is the sex part---weeeelllll, there is the bathroom. And after peeking at the other comments, if you work at the love part, the sex will take care of itself---and how!!! And then why would anyone ever want to cheat???

PatHous56PatHous56almost 18 years ago
Betrayal of trust

I like this variant on "Once upon a time." It's the fairy tale story of true love crashing on the rocks of a cheater's reality; hang him out to dry, I say. Patricia

EmJ0385EmJ0385almost 18 years ago
I know him...

He's the one that makes such a show of getting your number or email address; you know the story, after sharing a night of pleasure, he promises to get in touch later...and later never comes. Emily

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
very effective.....

and though i've been so busy it is nice to see you back!! this piece weaves in the emotive and at the end has a strong longing effect. though its written in a simple fashion, it bangs away in the aorta loud and clear. nicely done......don

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