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When you slip inside me
I fall into another world
An existence where nothing matters
Nothing is
Nothing feels
Nothing becomes
Quite as good as being one with you

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
An experience to die for…

What comes to mind: death god and prayer.

As for the death, the French expression which associates the orgasm with ‘a little death’ is quite familiar. Plus the absence of time which is mentioned connects the experience to death.

God: Is one and the experience here is described as eliminating any dualities.

Prayer: comes to mind where the ONE-ness is emphasized, through some activity which could be seemed as religious. Last clause is not the poem it’s my association. I have to say though that in some ancient cultures, sexual intercourse used to be part of the worshiping (where can I join?), so my association is not totally crazy.