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Orange Glow

bySyndra Lynn©

Others came before you
just experiments really
You were my first true love
played around before
but never all the way

I’ll never forget that night
the soft orange glow
from a space heater
caressed our skin
highlighted your eyes
as you looked into mine
and I knew I would love you
forever

I still do, you know
though we are connected
only by fiber optics
world wide web
electronic mail

Sometimes you come to me
in my mind
Sometimes I come for you
by my hand
as you thrust into me
nothing between us
but your cock
and a soft orange glow




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by MarkHughes06/28/13

Subtle, intimate, then finally raw

I loved this. It is subtle, understated, properly poetic - then those last lines deliver an erotic shock. Beautiful.

Having seen other comments, I can only say that I am of the school of thought thatmore...

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