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i feel wrapped in sandpaper and velvet all at once.
burning and freezing from the inside out.
i feel as heavy as lead, and as light as air.
falling and flying at the same time.
i have never felt more whole,
yet i shatter into a million pieces.
i close my eyes and i see stars.
going nowhere and going so very far.
you brought me to the edge,
and you pushed me over.

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painful_rapturepainful_raptureover 10 years agoAuthor
Tsotha

This was me poking fun at all of the erotica and smutty romance novels I've read lately. Every time somebody orgasms, it's one thing, or the complete opposite. :D

TsothaTsothaover 10 years ago

I like the words you've chosen, and the contrasting (opposing?) feelings.

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