Oriental Garden

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Am I searching for some hidden message?
Astro laden in physics and so forth,
I lay awake with green tub fixtures.
Just a hermit, a widow of contentment.
A sea of friends couldn't dull the pain.
Control could ease desperation.
If only I could muster.
If art imitates life, I am just a cheap imitation.

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variable Xyvariable Xyover 18 years ago
see

you do write good poetry. nice elements and style. i like it lots ;)

AppleBiterAppleBiterover 18 years ago
As so often when I read your poetry, I have to say

sometimes I feel the same.

carsonshepherdcarsonshepherdover 19 years ago
life imitates -

that green bathtub of yours.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I like this

however, adding "and so forth" to a poem is like using "etc" in a speech. If you want your reader to wonder, just leave the line as it is without and so forth...otherwise a good poem

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