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point out the stars to my dog,
she does not look,
her star-cooked atoms still one
with their mother, while I
am lost in the emptiness
of space.
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buttersabout 13 years agolove the title, love the write
star-cooked atoms
the loneliness is haunting, here, but it works so well when held up against the fuzzy warmth of belonging you show us with these lines:
her star-cooked atoms still one
with their mother,
you're always interesting to read.
vrosej10about 13 years agoAn eerie little bitty thing
But loaded with meaning. I am a fan of short poems and this is a beaut. Got five and a recommend.
