Orrery

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A revolving nut sack of reality
in a milky way
a spray

Orrery Orrery
entrancing

mere balls encircling
balanced in swing
ovals around outskirted ovals

Orrery Orrery
mezmerizing

spheres in gear
dance around one
revolving revelations

Orrery Orrery
galactic galliard

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ishtatishtatabout 19 years ago
Orright

Charles Boyle would have liked your invention too.I did.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
very cool

This was a delight to read. :)

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

'New Poems Reviews'

thanks for the journey~

jthserrajthserraabout 19 years ago
an orbiting oral oratory...

some interesting consonance and assonance here. An odd poem... very good.

jim : )

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