Our lives cross

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Our lives cross

Now
     Is this how the universe started
          Big Bang
               Ever expanding

Awake
     Everything blinks into existence
          Fiery furnaces
               Coalescing forces

Fuse
     The heartbeat of the stars
          Unimaginable power
               Unspeakable beauty

Evolve
     Rules of nature born
          Laws followed
               Time begins

Life
     Matter at its most inspired
          Protein groups
               Primordial stew

Us
     Our world begins
          Awakening, fusion
               Evolving, Living

End
     Massive dark matter clouds
          Evolution fails
               Life ends

Repeat
     The universe turning in on itself
          Closed loop
               Always rebirth

Our lives cross

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Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
Comprehesive truths

Loved this tiling effect of evolving truths.. intimate relationships to the grander scheme of all that is.. nice work thank you

du lac

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
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can I steal this life, it is the most inspired

"Matter at its most inspired"

this is nice

"The heartbeat of the stars"

as a whole, it says too much, for the conclusion

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