Our Scars

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wakingDown
wakingDown
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The tissue remaining as testament to the pain
The residual deformation reminder of trauma
     Scar, mark, brand, tattoo

     Slashed with glass in a bar
Gouged by stone from a fall
     Stabbed by a thug
Burned after the explosion

The slow to fade imprint of the sting
The lingering evidence of the lashes

     Scraped with asphalt
Ripped by razorwire from a fence
     Bit by a dog
Battered after the fight

     Our scars are our lessons

wakingDown
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AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
Good to see you posting poems again

I like all of this a lot except for the last line which seems unnecessary to me, but just my opinion. The rest of it is really good and flows well.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
scars as reminders

Of where we've been. But resilience a predictor of where we'll go.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
THE LESSONS,,,,,, WE DESCRIBE AS MEMORIES

some self inflicted, others foisted upon us, TK U MLJ LV NV

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
well put

and constant reminders. 5ed