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Liar
Liar
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careful
not to spill
a single drop
of the expensive
elixir mix

he walks
on soft soles
through heavy
fragrances
hazingly sweet

eugenic
ideal dreams
in a still
politically correct
context

a delrosi winks
and bows
he stops
raise her neck
with a tender finger

and rolls
a glittering drop
onto her ever
extending
tongue

the garden swoons
and every stretching
stem wonders

who will be next?

Liar
Liar
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echoes_sechoes_sabout 20 years ago
gentle and delicate

"raise her neck

with a tender finger"

Vivid intense images. I loved this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
delicate eloquence

Exquisite, precise, lovely, palpable sensuality.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Ah...

very good, had me almost breathless in the greenhouse there. Exotic and erotic. I looked up the title in the dictionary before reading, nothing there... but after reading I realize it must be a variety of orchid?

jim :)

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
Oh to be...

an orchid in this garden. Lovely vivid images, tender, delicate, beautiful...such care with words and flowers. Thank you.

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