Erotic PoetryPassionate AngerTENSE. RESTLESSNESS.
THINKING. FEELING.
ANGER. ANNOYANCE.
TAKE ME. USE ME.
SHOW ME. DOMINATE ME.
BEAT MY ASS. MAKE IT RED.
FUCK ME. HARD. HARDER.
DON'T STOP. MAKE ME CRY OUTLOUD.
MAKE ME FEEL YOU. MAKE ME KNOW THAT IT IS YOU.
MAKE ME CUM. FILL ME WITH YOURS.
HOLD ME CLOSE. HOLD ME TENDERLY.
LET ME KNOW THAT YOU CARE.
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That's what I thought, BBB. You have to look at what the writing is about...and read it in that mindset...in my opinion.
The All Caps
Makes it more intense and the anger really comes through.
@RickyChampagne Thank you...and yes you have. I'm glad you still enjoy it!
Intense
I like this one. I have told you that before.
When I wrote this piece, I felt anger and frustration. This was the way it came out...and I felt that this was the only way it could be written.
Thank you for reading, critiquing, and voting on it. I do appreciate hearing people's opinions.more...
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